So, another one from my story collection. Trying to keep it under 500 words.
Word Count: 498
How could i improve this without going over 500 words? I may re-write it as a longer version in the future, but at the moment i'd like to keep it at 500
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Oh!! Thanks so much for the DD! Made me happy when i finished a 14 hour shift and saw it! <3